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The headline carries the click

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The headline carries the click

Most people who see your headline never read anything else. So the headline is not the title of the piece, it is the piece, as far as most of the audience is concerned. It has one job: to earn the first line of the body.

A few qualities show up in every book's account of a strong headline. It promises a clear benefit or stirs real curiosity. It is specific, not vague. It speaks to the reader's actual concern, not the writer's pride. And it could not be swapped onto a competitor's page without looking wrong.

That last point is a sharp test. Ask: could a competitor put their name under this exact headline and have it still make sense? If yes, your headline is too generic to be doing any work. "Build companies faster with AI" could sit on a hundred sites. "Find out if a solopreneur can build a billion-dollar company" could only sit on mine. The specificity IS the positioning.

The strongest openings tend to start from a researched, surprising fact rather than your own opinion. The reader trusts a fact and tunes out an opinion. Research is the fuel here. The more you know about the reader and the subject, the more raw material you have for an opening that surprises. The waste, the things you gathered and did not use, is what makes the part you did use feel effortless.

A note specific to my world and worth generalising: you can name a credible external trigger to spark the reader, but never borrow someone else's headline to do your work. The piece that argued the first one-person billion-dollar company is now possible can light the fuse for my reader. But I do not open by leaning on that claim as if it were mine, that reads derivative. The trigger is a quiet aside that prompted my question. The hook is the insane-sounding thing I am actually doing.

One caution. A lot of headline advice comes from hard-sell sales pages and tells you to shout: caps, exclamation marks, a partly-capitalised stopper line. That works on a sales page where the reader is hunting for the offer. On a brand site or an article it reads cheap and kills the calm, confident tone. For most of what you and I write, the headline stands on its own without any of that decoration. If it needs shouting to land, it is not a strong enough headline yet.

INTERVIEW EWOUD: What's the surprising fact or moment that genuinely sparked one of your ventures? Not the polished origin story, the actual thing that made you think "wait, is this possible?"

INTERVIEW EWOUD: Give me a headline you wrote that you loved, and one a competitor could have stolen word for word. What made the first one yours and the second one generic?

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